Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 1 month agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square18fedilinkarrow-up1308arrow-down111
arrow-up1297arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 1 month agomessage-square18fedilink
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down15·1 month agoThat formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up6arrow-down1·1 month agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down13·edit-21 month agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-21 month agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down6·1 month agoThank you captain obvious.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·1 month agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down3·edit-21 month agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
That formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.