@originalpoetry Finally Done
My journey has been long.
My fever dream is finally over.
Done, is the pain and suffering.
Yet still I feel stuck in this dream.
My feet are still wet with the mud of the path.
Is this journey really over; finally over and done?
Stuck in the perpetual nightmare.
Long is the journey of pain and suffering.
Have I made this journey or is this yet a delusion?
Nay, my journey is done and gone.
Time to shake off the mud from my boots.
Leave behind the pain of the past—I’m finally done.
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Nicely written and uplifting
Perhaps a conscious decision to be is all that we need for change
Very nice.
My feet are still wet with the mud of the path is brilliant. Very tactile and love the flow of the sentence



