• thanksforallthefish@literature.cafe
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    1 year ago

    I struggled with it too, but I don’t think it’s just the translation (although some of the phrasing is awkward), for me there was a disconnect with the mindset / cultural assumptions at times.

    Not enough to make it unreadable, but enough to break the flow at times. It’s rare for me to have to reread a paragraph for comprehension, but I had to a few times in this series.