Wanted to do a larger study of the Edgar Payne landscape I had previously tried. Really enjoy trying to match his minimalist impressionism but went a little bolder on the sky than his original just for kicks ans giggles.

  • Gekkonen
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    5 months ago

    I love seeing your work!

    You might want to make your shadows more blue, and your contrast maybe deeper. If you compare the cliff in the original vs yours, it’s much darker than the lit side of the cliff.

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      5 months ago

      Thanks for the advice!! I see what you are saying about the contrast, I was getting slightly frustrated while trying to mix the shadows, and some blue definitely would have helped in hindsight. Always stoked to hear constructive criticism!!! Or any criticism honestly ha.